Ch5 04

by alli on February 10, 2014 at 12:01 am

Chapter: Chapter 5

Characters: Daveed Cortier, Jillian Chevalier, Lucien Malroy

Bet you didn’t see THAT one coming, did you?

Neither did Lucien.

Oh those Air Elementals. So flighty.

Greyman
So… we are… not… exactly talking about a slow waltz here, are we?
- Jim
  Maybe it’s a slow, pants-less waltz?
David Nuttall
So much for my prediction that her clothes stay on during her dancing.
Bill Meahan
Seven veils. She needs seven veilsI tell you. 0:)
Before I beat him off, The Proofreader From Hell was babbling something about “make do” rather than “make due.” He is such a pain!
- alli
  There we go, fixed the mistake =)
  - Bill Meahan
    TPFH is very pleased 😉
    - ohlaa
      Another proofreader would be pleased if “defese” were to become “defense” in the previous page.
      - alli
        The previous page has been fixed as well =)
Dannsir
I have to thank this comic for introducing me to the Dance of the Seven Veils (in the comments) I am totally going to perform it at some point. She isn’t going to do that though, it’s too particular. My guesses are Belly Dance (without a veil) or Ballet. Both of these dances are quite graceful and should appeal to an air elemental. Plus Ballet is a prestigious dance and her being a noble, it is more likely.
Bender_Sastre
Waltz looks best when you take when you make broad steps, which, for a woman requires having a lots of leg room in your dress. Most dances require a large flowing skirt . . . or one slit nearly up to your hip. Besides, I wager Jill takes some tongue-in-cheek pleasure in getting Lucien all hot and bothered. 😉
kyriss12
Me thinks her danging style is something a bit more fast paced, maybe even something that can be converted into a fighting style. My question is why the hell is Lucian so eager to see her dance?
- ohlaa
  You’ve just said it yourself, he hopes it can be converted into a fighting style.
  - David Nuttall
    Perhaps a bedroom style?
l33tninja
Is Lucien *really* protesting, or just pretend protesting?